E issues I would have given this a 5 star rating as the story and world have been thought out
*in incredible detail *incredible detail off to the author for creating a great story and here is to hoping that the third instalment delivers just as well as this one I think it much like it s predecessor is a rather good read But like the title of this review suggests it s riddled With Minor Grammatical Issues Throughout Misspelling Of Character Names Is minor grammatical issues throughout Misspelling of character names is another fault but my biggest thing that affected my reading was the poor grammer that affected the flow of reading Scenes just seemed to appear creatures and details that had no descriptions or if they did they were generic and repeated I think that the basis of the story is really interesting and well thought out But I think that an ditor or third party should really rummage through this and turn it from a pretty good read into an amazing one Like the idea of the main characters improving themselves in such a hostile world as well as them trying to improve the lives of those they care about Loved the characters story and the world that is being built Looking forward to the next book in the series Fantastic read lots going on and interesting things happening on The Great Orange Leonard Scandal (Tall Tales Series; 4) every page Can t wait for next book The Third Realm Thanks Michael Awesome followup want Has good basecity building and the world s society is very interesting Strength rules all I love the crafting in this and the constant pace Lost a star as there a uite a few typos in the book and a number of sentences that I could not decipher Great story and I will beagerly awaiting the seuel I m totally loving this series Both MCs work learn and fight their way upward with true grit and determination The whole world has such detail and depth that. Make the rules and the weak cling to them for protection and hope that they might be left in peaceThey passed through the trials of the Beast Mountain Dungeon taking control of it and becoming the leader of nearly two hundred peopleNow in command of the Alva Dungeon and looking to forge ,
It s fascinating all on it s own which makes the story ven better Any avid reader of LITRPG will find this series is a top pick for their reading list of LITRPG will find this series is a top pick for their reading list can t wait to see what happens next Loving the story but the diting WowI ve never come across a finished published and paid book that was so riddled with spelling A Fairly Honourable Defeat errors grammaticalrrors font changes random capitalisation numbers in the middle of words paragraphs that start in the middle of a sentence tcI can t comprehend How This Was Deemed Publishable this was deemed publishable the story is fantastic so I ll read the next one 4 12 StarsMy personal rating system1 Star Couldn t finish the book2 Stars Didn t really like the book but was interested nough in the story to finish Skipping great chunks3 Stars The book was okay finished it and will consider reading from the author4 Stars Really Elisabeth Shue 135 Success Facts - Everything You Need to Know about Elisabeth Shue enjoyed the book will check out others by this author4 12 Stars Loved the book will immediately check out others by author if asked will recommend book5 Stars LOVED the book will immediately check out all others by author will premptively recommend book to ALL my book friendsI loved it and xpect I ll be rereading it again in the future This book is a solid 4 and a half stars which I ve bumped future This book is a solid 4 and a half stars which I ve bumped to five as doesn t do half stars The only small problem I had with it is that when showing the levelling stats the publisher uses ual signs rather than dashes Normally this wouldn t be a problem but I listen to my books for hours while driving and as I use the kindle text to speech I find myself listening to about ten uals uals Gone (Gone, eualsuals Threads Of The Shroud etc Then you get a sentence and another ten repeats ofuals Have that happen ten times in two pages and it gets old FAST Without that I d give this book it s well deserved 5 stars. New future they needpower mana stones dungeon cores monster cores if not then the Dungeon will stop functioning and they will need to relocate once againAs they ascend to the second realm Erik and Rugrat need to grow their skills gain information and find a dungeon Its hardly All Seated on the Ground ever thata. I have Untitled. enjoyed the series so far the mechanics of the world are clear andasy to understand a lot of the Wiring excess jargon has been shaved out of it to allow a good merging of game mechanics with a form of reality My only criticism would be thexcess amount of telling with very little showing in how the story is presented While this Doesn This Book Follows On Book One And Follows This book follows on from one and follows and Rugrat s shenanigans in the 2nd realm a lot of crafting a fair bit of fighting and a considerable amount of travelling across the 2nd realm I fighting and a considerable amount of travelling across the 2nd realm I Against All Odds enjoyed this book probablyven than the first If you liked the first you will most likely like this one too Thanks to the author for writing another amazing book and I m Jingling Daddys Bells BDSM Menage eagerly looking forward to the third Good story and have gone on to read the next in the seriesHowever the kindledition is plagued with formatting The DOS errors There are spelling and grammar mistakes onvery page the font size and formatting is all over the place Most of this would have been sorted with a simple run through with a spell checker the rest with a proof reader To release it in this fashion is pretty poorA shame as the story itself is very Against All Odds engaging and Injoyed it s great deal As of the time I read this 251118 the number of spelling and grammatical Sleep, Circadian Rhythms, and Metabolism errors in this book really bugged me along with the occasional random change in font size Many words are just completely wrong as if spell check has been allowed to run rampant and change fix most of the spelling mistakes with the wrong wordsI don t claim to be a perfect grammatical genius but when publishing a book it should surely be proof read and checked by a few people first and any glaringrrors of which there were many can be remedied before being publishedIf not for thes. When Erik and Rugrat Treasons, Stratagems, And Spoils entered the ten realms they didnt know what was going on They only knew that they had contracted the two week curseWhenntering the second realm they came to understand their character sheets and part of the system that is called the ten realms A place that the strong.